Valentine’s Day Tribute – How I turned my Military SF into a PR Space Opera

Thursday February 10, 2011 | By Hieronymus Hawkes | Uncategorized

When I started planning the current WIP, I didn’t have any romance in mind at all. It was going to be straight up Military SF. I don’t think I even had any major female characters. As the ideas percolated I changed the sex of one of my major characters to a female, and then hit on the idea for my MC as a vampire and the entire scope of the book changed completely as did the POV. I had in mind to do a first person story from the vampires POV.

A lot of time passed in the real world while all these gyrations were going on and in the midst of it my wife started reading again. When I say she started reading again I mean she started reading voraciously. It all happened more or less simultaneously with me trying to develop my story arc. She started really getting into the paranormal romance books.

Twilight started it all. It was like an entry level drug, which leads to stronger stuff. Then she got me to read some of the stuff she was reading and I found that I actually enjoyed a lot of it. I’m particularly fond of Patty Briggs’ Mercy Thompson books, and Kelley Armstrong’s Otherworld series, and I even read most of the Archeron books by Sherrilyn Kenyon. At some point in there I realized that if I could develop a story arc with some romance in it the appeal would widen and it would also allow me to bring in an entirely new POV that would let me explore more of the universe I was creating. That was when the current outline materialized.

I have two main characters, one male and one female. I had the idea of a Y shaped story arc, chasing both POVs until they intermingle to form a single plot line, allowing me to bring in some romantic elements and defining the course of my sequels. I had never written a female perspective before so it was challenging to make her feminine but not a caricature. I really started studying the personalities of some of the woman I work with. I work with female pilots and my female lead is a pilot. What I discovered over the course of the last couple of years is that men and women can have similar personalities and similar interests. I can find a woman that if I just described her likes and dislikes you might think it was a guy. I have also met men that were the opposite. This was a bit of a relief, but on the other hand I have to keep the reader in mind and what their expectation might be. It’s not completely defining, if I write her well enough I should be able to sell her regardless of the things she’s interested in, but it freed me to take her some places I might not have otherwise.

Doing the romance part and not rushing it is not as easy as you might think. I think most of us can remember those first moments when we knew we liked someone or the big moments like when we got engaged or married, but how well do you remember all the intervening steps. It’s like a dance and you need to draw it out and make it last a bit, tantalizing the reader and delaying the gratification as much as you dare. I’m still in the middle of that part and I’m working hard to get it right. The nice part is I think about my wife a lot, since I know I did some things right in our courtship.

Think about your significant other this week and try to do something special to remind them how much they mean to you. I hope you all have a great Valentine’s Day!


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5 Responses

  1. It's funny how you said \”Twilight\” started your wife's reading habits. The same happened with me. I was stuck on Stephen King and Dean Koontz, then my daughter introduced me to Twilight (I think I devoured the series in a week). I went searching for more books, and when I wasn't completely satisfied with what I found, decided to try and write my own.As for your story – I'll try and get back to you sometime today!!

  2. Todd, I am very impressed… I love how it rekindled or kindled a new sharing experience with your wife. I also think almost no story is complete without some sort of romance. Afterall, even if it is passing it plays a very prominent role. Thanks for sharing! I'm smiling!Sammy SuttonKing Solomon's JourneyThe Dominguez Adventures

  3. @Stacy I know a lot of people are down on Stephanie Meyer, but I have a similar story. I have to give her credit for making me want to write. My vampires are much closer to traditional though. Thanks for posting!

  4. @Sammy Thank you so much Sammy! I am trying to encourage her to write too, and I think she is finally starting down that road. We are best buddies, so we try to share interest in each other's passions. Thanks so much for coming by and for such a lovely comment!

  5. Totally love your blog Mr. Moody. =) See?!? I do read it! Now finish your book already – you left me wondering what was going to happen next.Happy Valentines Day m'love.Love,Kristi (aka Mrs. Moody) 😉

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