Pimping a book: Wired for Story by Lisa Cron
Saturday October 26, 2013 | By Hieronymus Hawkes | Novel Review
Wired for Story: The Writer’s Guide to Using Brain Science to Hook Readers from the Very First Sentence by Lisa Cron
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Every writer should read this book. It has great insight into how the brain and the written word interface and the avenue is via story. Fantastic learning tool for writers of all ability levels.
I was turned on to Wired for Story through an interview Chuck Wendig did with Lisa Cron in July 2012 for his blog Terribleminds. She gave us her views on developing story. Lisa has a very fresh take on the importance of STORY and how it relates to the human brain. She is a producer for Showtime and Court TV, a writer, and also teaches a writing course at UCLA, but spent the last ten years researching the connection between neuroscience and how the brain relates to stories. It’s quite fascinating and illuminating, allowing us to learn techniques that will make our story click with the reader. They can’t help themselves, the brain is hard wired for receiving stories and if we can strike the right chord it will resonate within the readers mind.
On Lisa’s blog she touched on why books that get panned by critiques can still sell at amazing rates. It answers the question as to why books like 50 Shades of Gray can sell millions of books. I remember picking up The Hunger Games, because my wife and daughter love it, and reading the first couple of pages and saying to myself, the prose just aren’t all that, but next thing I knew I was 100 pages in and couldn’t put it down. Stephanie Myers’ Twilight books have been criticized for not having elaborate prose also, but the one thing all of these books have in common is they tell a great story and in a way that touches those chords in the mind.
Wired for Story is broken down into twelve chapters with a cognitive hook and a writer’s shortcut she calls the story secret for each chapter. She gives us concrete examples for each section of the book and breaks down what the writer is doing.
The concept is amazing — we are designed to think in story form. It allows us to use a form of mental telepathy with the story teller, that when done right is an experience almost as visceral as the real thing. It allows us to learn by using the experience of the story instead of having to live through something to learn it the hard way. It has certainly saved lives. The takeaway for Lisa is that we need to hook the reader from the very first sentence. She opens up her book with some fascinating facts about how the brain filters the 11 million bits of information that are bombarding us every second. Wham, she has me right away. Learning through story has been saving mankind since the stone age.
Next, she explain in very clear terms what story actually is:
“What happens” is the plot.
“Someone” is the protagonist.
The “Goal” is what’s known as the story question.
And “how he or she changes” is what the story itself is actually about.
As counterintuitive as it may sound, a story is not about the plot or even what happens in it. Stories are about how we, rather than the world around us, change.
She continues with ways to hook the reader. Tidbits like “nothing focuses the mind like surprise” and “we are looking for a reason to care” and “we need to meet the protagonist as soon as possible” cut right through the b. s. and give us concrete clues. She describes the reasons we need to be clear in our writing so that the reader can anticipate what might happen next. That is what will keep them turning the page.
She also has an interesting take on writing style. She claims that “learning to ‘write well’ is not synonymous with learning to write a story. And of the two, writing well is secondary.” This probably won’t go down well with literary fiction fans, but for genre writers the message is clear — tell us an interesting story.
She describes the relationship of theme with plot and how tone is just as important has what you are saying. The key to the whole thing lies with emotion. It determines the meaning of everything. If we aren’t feeling we aren’t conscious, and we certainly aren’t reading the book if it’s not reaching us on an emotional level.
She breaks down the use of POV for conveying feelings and thoughts. She is not a fan of head hopping, because it is so jarring if done poorly.
She describes the essence of why showing is so much more effective than telling.
Cause and effect has its own chapter and it clearly delineates why each scene should ask “What is at stake here?” Everything needs to be connected together so that it can make sense. She also discusses how to stay focused on the cause and effect and still keep things unpredictable.
She closes the book with a chapter on revision and how to do it right, adding in the layers that take a book to the next level. This book is so chock full of useful advice, and I’ve only touched on a few things here. It should be mandatory reading for every beginning level writing course. She opened my eyes to thinking about writing in a completely different way. The tools are the same, but it’s all in the focus. I can’t say enough positive things about this brilliant book.